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True love unwinding

Play-full passion's smiling
red rose's twining.

Chunky chocolates dreamy

gold rings linking.

Crazy confetti swirling.

Jam tarts baking

sweethearts awaking.

Cupids arrows shooting

heavenly bliss glowing.

Beautiful flowers dancing

sensual touch feeling.

Midnight candles flickering

true love binding.

 

 

 

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this was just a poem i wrote the other day but i am not to sure about it

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  • Swtpoetryman
    June 14, 2008
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    Delicious!

    JAM TARTS & BRITISH TEA -
    make me a randy fellow, indeed!

    A short and sweet piece, Sweetie. Thanks for sharing it with me. And for some reason that I can't quite explain - I'm getting very hungry again!

    Now I'm off to visit the fridge.

    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Blooming Poet
    April 11, 2008
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    Beautiful poem and thanks so much for entering. Congrats on the HM and good luck in my contest.


  • LissaRox
    March 4, 2008
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    This poem really flowed together well. I really liked it a lot. Good job!


  • N e a r
    February 16, 2008

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    "jam tarts baking" ~ YUM! My favorite line here! I LOVE THE WAY YOU WROTE THIS. Your words just molded together, and they went hand-in-hand. Perfect description of the holiday as well! Tastefully done. So much that I want a Valentine's Day sugar cookie now! And I saw them in Dollar General. Bookmarking.
    ~

    Thanks for entering my Valentine's Day contest, and good luck!

    M a r l u x i a


  • melphleg gold member
    February 4, 2008

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    lots of descriptive words for the day. I'm not sure "April Showers" fits for a poem about a day in February.

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