Out of my hole I crawled only to see
Death, destruction, war
I hear the screams of the dieing
As they fall to their knees
Trembling with the pain of mankind
As the blood leaves their bodies
And the air leaves their lips for the last time
They cry for there salvation
From a god that must not care for his children anymore
For he lets men kill
lets innocent die
and lets the guilty walk free
Author notes
Dark thoughts to finish...
Out of my hole I crawled only to see...
and i am sorry for not having that in there before
A contest entry
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Thanks for your entry in my contest, and although many think God is to blame for all that we don't understand or agree with, I don't feel he should be held responsible for some things that man often can control.
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very deep thoghts you have penned
I can feel the pain and suffering
great expression of feelings
thank you for entering the contest...
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Very true, lot of injustice in this world.... kinda how the drunk driver isn't usually the one to be killed... seems to be the way
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thats ok i just wantd it in there I like this alot!! and didnt want to DQ it!!
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