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Happy Ending?

Here I sit, and here I wonder
What it is you think about me.
Because everything i thought i knew about you was a lie.

So this is my way of saying goodbye
to the memories we're never going to have.

What we had was amazing, I'd keep it if i could.
But it's time to move on and leave the past behind us
Even if it means letting go of that which we once held closest to our hearts.


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  • TheRoughDraft
    February 4, 2008

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    "the memories we're never going to have"
    Nice line, very emotive. Quite a raw poem here, told in a very simple way. Gets the message across clearly and the line lenght shows your anguish well