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Home made lullabies

As night time falls
he starts to fuss
nothing I do calms him this night
so I start to sing lullabies
I run out of songs to sing
so my mind starts to whirl
and the words come to me
I start to sing him to sleep
with a soft melody made by me
"Sleep my baby,
don't you cry,
take that ride on lullabies,
as you sleep and dream my dear,
mommy will always....always be here"
the words start to sooth
when nothing else helped
he starts to drift off to sleep
and gently cuddles his teddy bear.

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  • Mrs. C.
    July 22, 2008

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    thatnk you forentering this poem was so very sweet, but if you want to be in my family or a friend i need your age and what you want to be.


  • aboomer silver member
    May 31, 2008

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    Darling image! I can picture this so well - I did it with my sons, too. Those 'home-made lullabies' really seemed to sooth them (I know, for me, it wasn't my voice!..LOL).
    Thanks for the memories this brought back!
    best wishes


  • z etoile
    February 20, 2008

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    Awe this is so absolutely awesome I am so glad you sing your own lullabies to your baby that is so sweet!


  • Hated.
    February 6, 2008
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    aww thats sooo sweet i like it a lot and good luck in muh contest


  • any1
    February 4, 2008

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    this is so sweet. I can hear the tune "hush little baby don't you cry" can't remember the name...something about a diamond ring; if that diamond ring don't shine...anyway it sounds similar. Thank you for the entry.

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