There is no fool like-
Cheeks burn scarlet
(could have, should have, would have...
didn't)
Alone in awkward
silence.
Words tangled and twisted,
thoughts coming undone,
the utmost in inarticulateness.
Convey in motions,
not mutual feelings
(could you want me?)
Mistaken identities,
a thousand times
and over.
-There is no fool like me.
Author notes
"There is no fool like_____________"
A contest entry
- #41 by daviscth.
300 points, ended February 11, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I can positive relate to this.
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Thank you very much.
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This is such a unique and unexpected take on the prompt. You pulled out all the stops on this beauty!
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Thank you very much.
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