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The Pleasure of Pain

Cut,
Slice, slit, slide
Razorblades running
down my spine.
Fingertips edge
towards the bone
Pressing firmly
to own, the pain
so sweet and bitter
a tear of blood is shed
or is it joy
streaming from my face?
Nails sink deep in skin
caresses soft curves
from within.

I shiver

the cold blade massages my skin.
Blood wells up
and pours and drips
Slowly from my scarlet slit.

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  • i really like this!

    a tear of blood is shed
    or is it joy
    streaming from my face?

    love that bit! thanks so much for entering my contest and good luck! =]


  • BlackBloodyRose
    May 18, 2008
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    oooooo

    oo i like . a tear of blood is shed or is it joy i like that alot. very nice


  • inhisimage
    May 16, 2008
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    I really like this ALOT. I know watcha talking about 4 real