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Lady

Lady

Bound
body,
free my mind,
Lady of mine.

Sensual pleasures
derived from loving pain.

Naked flesh, willing canvas,
body writhes at Your perfect touch.
Pushing boundaries all limits stretched,
intimacies shared, our love declared.

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this was done as an etheree assignment.

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    February 6, 2008
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    this is good, i mean that is all i can say about this, keep it flowing my friend


    • -Ang-
      February 6, 2008
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      Thank you DP, your comment is greatly appreciated

      ang


  • Moons Lunar Angel
    February 4, 2008

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    This is really good, I love the flow.
    Keep on penning,
    lil


    • -Ang-
      February 6, 2008
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      thank you for reading and commenting

      ang


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    February 4, 2008

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    Superb!

    I love the rythym and flow to this, subtle yet very beautiful and sensually done..Great job!

    **Ktulu Blackwolfe**


    • -Ang-
      February 6, 2008
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      thank you so much for your wonderful words Master Ktulu, they are so truly appreciated.

      *curtsies*

      Ang


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    February 4, 2008

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    Stunning Again!!!!

    There is a hell of a lot of wonderful imagery going on here. The piece is hot sensual and deep. I like the way you have described the 'body' as a canvas.


    Indeed, it is waiting for you to produce your artistic flow and talent upon it. It really is beautiful, deep and hot writing.

    My Sister
    you have done brilliantly-well with this. Well done.
    Much love to you
    Your Brother
    Wayne Leon

    xxx

    • -Ang-
      February 4, 2008
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      thank you so much for your encouraging words my dearest Brother.
      i always look forward to what you have to say.

      ang


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    February 4, 2008
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    sweet, hot and very lovingly put. Beautiful in the best ways hon.

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