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slow swing into the darker day

Missing image




the slow sway
in the light breeze
freezes my core,
innunciates my desperation,
abandonment is
no longer an unwelcome friend



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  • Nicotine Eyes
    February 4, 2008
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    um..wow i dont know what to say. Thanks & good luck.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 4, 2008

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    so beautifully written with a darkness that twists within your words and expresses the picture. best of luck