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Love in time

I think about life
I think about love
I think about the past
I think about the future
I think about the present

But most of all I think about you
I think about what you say
and dream of what you do
I picture you in every way

doing what it is you do best
being there for me, lil' ol' Seth

I thank you so much for what you've done
you've stuck by me, even when it was no fun
through thick and thin and everything between
you was there for me, when I was nice and mean

You've helped me through times that I couldn't bear
yup, it was only you that really there

To sum it all up what I'm saying is you're the answer
you're like a cure to a disease worse then cancer

You make me feel alive, that's something no woman has done
that makes me realize inside, that you've gotta be the one

Take this to your heart and mind
cus this is Love in time...

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Written November 18th, 2003

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  • November 22, 2003
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    stop maming me upset but happy at the same time lol this is beautiful she surely deserves you, have you shown her these coz i think she will fall into your armsright way if you do!!!!!!! thankyou


  • RomanticHeart
    November 20, 2003
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    nice

    this poem is nice, and i hope that what ever ur heart desires ur heart gets. but make sure its worth it in the end. cause love can be a fucked up thing specially when u put others hearts and feelings in it...and then u have to put what is best for the Both of u, or them before ur own....*sometimes* but as time goes. u'll learn that. *i did u the favor of checking urs out. u could do the same*
    One Love, One Voice, One Pen
    Blessed Little One


  • cryinthorn13
    November 18, 2003
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    Very sweet..your lucky you found someone to stay there for you no matter what..I've found ppl like that, but soon enough when my times were to rough for them to handle they left..
    Good write..
    Jess


  • A Lonely Akumu
    November 18, 2003
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    nice really good write

  • reality dreams
    November 18, 2003
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    beautiful!....ur a lucky guy if this is what youve really got!! wish i had something (or someone i guess) as sweet as this....know where i can find one?...lol.. anywhoo, great write!!
    luck in life!
    ~BRITT~

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