A girl in a picture
with yellow green eyes
silence has bound her speak
as she secretly cries
sour powerful tears stream
speaking, through the silence,
of the pain in her life
no words can express the hurt
as she secretly cries
the girl in a picture is you
the girl in the picture is I
A contest entry
- Quickie by creationsfromheart.
465 points, ended February 4, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What'dya Think?
Comments
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A tense brittle poem that reveals the true hurt of the girl, such emotion created in a few telling words.
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Wow! What an emotional write! Congrats on the HW. You deserve it.
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this is a very good write and I love it, and you are so right there are no words to exspress such pain.
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