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Vampires

Sweetly Seductive.
Impossible to Resist.
Impossible to Restrain.
More impossible to kiss.
White marble fangs,glinting in the dark.
Patiently waiting to leave their mark.
Wanting and waiting,to sink right in.
Never will you, see daylight again.
Amber gold eyes, bloodless lips.
Blackened nails, sharpened at the tips.
Bronze-black hair, luscious curves.
For them your body will surely yearn.
Bony fingers, skeleton-like hands.
Cup the back of your neck as you stand.
Icy breath, only inches away.
hairs standing on end, farewell I say.
An ear-peircing scream, the deed is done.
The Vampires have claimed another one.

Author notes

this poem as inspired by my close friend whom I will refer to as Moonlight.

what do you think this is about?~_~

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  • fallingsky
    February 5, 2008

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    Awesome. I have this wierd obsession with vampires. I don't know what it is but they seem to mesmerize me. I love this poem. I have read many different views on how vampires become and what a vampire is. Good job!


  • XxDesperiaxX
    February 5, 2008
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    WOW!!!!!

    i love vampires
    but thats a bit weird.
    Good job though