Knowing we'll grow old together
Knowing you'll support me in everything
This is what makes me happy
To know that Valentine's Day will always be spent with you
Smiles and kisses under rainfall to be cherished
It truly makes me happy
Spending every moment looking forward to the end of the day
To sleep with you in the same sheets
You make me happy
Words can't spin the tale of my heart
They only give a glimpse of what's inside
Your heart, your soul, your love, your passion
You're the icing on my cake
Loving you is what makes me happy.
Let me keep on doing it?
Author notes
it sucks.....
A contest entry
- may I ask?... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended February 6, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Words can't spin the tale of my heart
They only give a glimpse of what's inside
Your heart, your soul, your love, your passion
You're the icing on my cake
just a beauty of the love and the beauty of the heart of yours is here in magical words..wonderful..thanks for your entry ..goodluck..
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It doesn't suck!...It's heartfelt and so loving...anyone would be honored to have this written about and/or for them...I know I would
...Best of luck in this contest. Peace, Rhonda(Just a couple of tweaks; Line 10:...the tale 'of' my heart; Line 12: 'Your' heart, your soul...) 
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