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[ That little devil ]

That little devil
With an angels wings
Pestering all
As he flies and sings

That little imp
With a babies face
Causing pain
I wish he’d get off my case

That little minion
With such a heart
He doesnt care
That I'm ripped apart

Stupid Cupid
Leave me be
Get of my case
Let me be me

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  • xblakxrosexremainsx
    February 14, 2008

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    amazing!

    this is a really nice descriptive poem.
    talking about what i wanted!
    you did such an amazing job expressing your thoughts!!
    thank youuu

    -Casey

  • Lamia
    February 6, 2008

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    Awesome poem. I love the rhyme and it makes such a good point. Cupid needs to piss off and leave us poor folk alone...or arm us with bows so that we might have a fighting chance...little bastard haha
    Good luck in the contest