A rainbow in my soul
shines through my eyes;
lighting up the world
and chasing away the darkness.
Author notes
For char's prompt!
A contest entry
- I owe a PIF quickie by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended February 5, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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i think this is very pretty and it's always nice to have something to chase away the darkness
be wello and be blessed
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thank you and the same to you!
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its pretty i like it
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thank you!
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this is a beautiful take on the prompt and you have captured the beauty of it aswell well done and best of luck
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Thanks! I'm glad you think so! I wasn't too sure on how to take your prompt but I'm glad it worked. I'm quite pleased with this!
Thank you!
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