Looking round,
Fear is here,
I smell everything;
The untamed animals,
Hunting me...
Author notes
"In the dark forest nothing remains tame,
though creatures have pretensions of sanity"
A contest entry
- A Quick Contest Thingy 10-13-13 by Cerulean Sunrise.
400 points, ended February 4, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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love it
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I would put untamed & find a cooler word for all
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Words taken and heeded... Thanks
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powerful and unique touch on the prompt dear evil one. you capture it beautifully so glad i didnt enter lol
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