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gentle iron

Because a child believes she can,
on faith, she does.

Having a core that will bend,
when life throws out curves.

Arms that give hope, security, love,
while teaching the reality.

A Mother is gentle iron.

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  • little-hug silver member
    February 5, 2008

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    So beautiful and powerful and striking! Your words always connect with my heart Congratulations on the silver trophy!
    lots of love
    Ellie x


  • grannyeri gold member
    February 4, 2008

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    Creative metaphor you used here. Liked the use of space, and the sentiments expressed so well in these lines; easy to read and understand.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    February 4, 2008

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    Such wonderful words of love and truth...the strength of a mother is so enduring and powerful and protective...their young are their life...excellent.
    Thank you for sharing!