Darling dearest, dearest darling
Simple sentences seem to have no spaces,
Fingertips fractures the abiltiy to doodle faces
Lingering too long, the liquid of the lead leaks
Weaving the threads through thuds of wounded skin
Careful not to care, Caring your acidic care
elsewhere. elsewhere. elsewhere.
Your heart is else where
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This is really a poem to be read out loud. The phonetics; the consonance and sibilance in this is fantastic. Thanks for sharing.
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:3
I like it.
Well, I don't think I'm going to go on a rant about it, but it was different then many things I read. Let us see...an emotional response .___.;
Do you mean caring? sixth line >_> careing your acidic care.
And elsewhere is always one word
Did you know there is a guy named David Elsewhere? ._.
dunno who he is really, his birthday is the day after mine.
-_-; I'm ranting, about nothing...
-waves bye-
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