Your soft parted lips
Are what I truly desire
And seeing your face
Sets my heart on fire
Those radient eyes
And lightly flushed cheeks
Give my arms goosbumps
For so many weeks
The touch of your hands
Upon my pale face
Makes my blood pound
And it makes my heart race
And though you already know
That I've fallen for you
I must say it again
Dear Brian I love you!
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Aww...this was so sweet. One thing you might want to change is the way you spelled "radiant." Again great poem. Did Brian like it?
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haha uhh i dont know why the last line made me laugh but it did.
i like it, its very beautiful!
good luck in my contest! -
I have read your verse
Thank you so much for submitting your words to my contest
I will comment in detail on my final selections
I wish you well in the contest
Thank you
Rick
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bleh gushy.
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Simply a true show of love, very beautiful.I really loved reading this because it came from your heart.
Great job
~Lisa~
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