Oh God
you carted me here to lure this
and to accumulate that
when I rated this
and when I scrutinized that
I discovered them
as distinguished
yet I am not emphatic for them
as I crave for the wonderful
only wonderful and that is you
Oh God....
In a list
A contest entry
- Choose A Phrase by piccola.
600 points, ended February 5, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A great write of praise. Thank you Prabhu for sharing this with all.
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Gave me goose bumps. I cry out with you here. For His love is our ultimate desire. Not religion, but relationship!
Thank you for saying it for us. Lovely, lovely petition!
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As spiritual being we are suppose to crave only the One True God not things put here on earth,enjoyed
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seems deep has a very spiritual significanc
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I love spiritual prose but it was hard to connect your statements. Will read more. -
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Another delightful piece...
Another delightful piece; it is too easy to become distracted with the World we live in - besides the human cares of everyday existence; we need to remember to pursue the ways of God and enjoy His pure love; a wonderfully conceived poem. --Joe
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This is a great use of the prompt and, as usual, you lift us all along the way. Thank you for sharing this one, poet...My favorite line here: 'I crave for the wonderful only wonderful and that is you...Oh God'...Awesome...Best of luck in the contest. Peace, Rhonda
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Nice take on the phrase. It reminds me of something in the Psalms that maybe King David would write
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A very nice poem
Love the infinite scope of which you speak when refering to God. The picture here is the topping on the cake.
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