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Swimming Alone

All alone and far away
I need you in my life to stay
lost each day in life's cruel swirl
wandering in this jumbled whirl.

Every day I long for you
remembering our love was true
your absence felt in pain each day
I wonder if we'll find our way.

Near to you I dream to be
yet you're so far across the sea
such loss I feel so deep within
across to you my spirit spins.

I know that we belong together
across lifes ocean of stormy weather
my wish to be within your arms
my world would then be filled with charm.

Right now I'm swimming round and round
soon surely I will come aground
it's so crazy I need you close to me
please free me from this dreary sea.

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"How I wish, how I wish you were here.
We're just two lost souls swimming in a fish bowl, year after year" Pink floyd

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  • Desired-Lucidity gold member
    February 18
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    do the small number of entries i am not going to cancel this contest

  • penman gold member
    February 5
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. So creative and expressive. Best of luck in the contest.

  • nothinghere silver member
    February 4

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    This is gorgeous hun, you do write a lyric so well, holds such gentleness and beauty within these lines

    Karen

  • awwww this is such a beautiufl write gran it holds deep affection of emotion and love and just stunning best of luck