Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Words Are Like Bullets

Words that don't matter
Just get in the way
Watch them all scatter
In just what we say
We can play sing the blues
If we choose
But it's time for reflection
And to just move.

Dreams of a lifetime
Just crash and burn
Throw me a lifeline
Before I return
To a life style
of drunken decline
Count all your blessings
That's maybe all that's left behind

[refrain]
I have been over and over
The same pages again
If it's love what's the difference?
It's still all heartache and pain
I can take all that you dish out
I've got a steely heart anyway
Because words are like bullets
They just simply...
They just simply ricochet


[Repeat 1st & 2nd verses]

A contest entry

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 5 of 5

  • babyseal
    November 29
    Edit | Reply
    Good. Finalist

  • piccola silver member
    June 20, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    words are like bullets
    They just simply...
    They just simply ricochet ... inventive and creative. I really like these lines a lot. Thank you for entering


  • Ms Raneika
    March 15, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Quite an interesting song I thank you for entering my contest much love, Raneika


  • Nature Song silver member
    February 17, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Interesting verses for a song! Not quite what I was looking for in this contest..but nicely done. Better luck next time ~Sie


  • Metaphorist
    February 7, 2008
    Edit | Reply
    Nice. Thanks for entering.

1 - 5 of 5