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Loveless Love

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do not turn pitiful eyes
to children hungry
and deprived

and then pass them
turning blind

pity yourself
poor soul

for you are dying
thinking
you are alive

starved by your greedy needs




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  • Heart Sutra
    February 16, 2008
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    Here is a subject that has often been mentioned about the western mind in regard to the deprived. It is true that many are consumed by greed in the western civilized world and many are destroyed by greed too. Thank you for sharing your poetry Myra. I always appreciate the touch you bring to a contest.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    February 4, 2008
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    yes we are all fat lazy and guilty, you made me ponder on this one well done xx