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What I Want To Do Now (revised)

What I want to do now
Is peel the shirt off the silkiness of your body
To hear the whisper of your name across my throat
The hush of smooth fabrics hitting the floor
You caressing my body with your fingertips
Drinking in your kisses
Being consumed by the fire that burns heavily into your black eyes
The pinching on my thighs as you roughly remove my panties
As I feel the glide of your fingers into the heat of my need
As the sensation roams over me
What I want to do now
To kiss your sensuous lips
Hear my name as I whisper my love along your body
Feel the heat as my hand brushes your skin
The tickle of my hair caressing the curves along your body
To hear you gasp my name as my mouth closes in
To feel your release and know that your powerless
What I want to do now
Is for us to become one
To move together to the beat of our own drum
Doing the dance that only true lovers do
The rhymic beating of our hearts as we move together
What I want to do now
Is feel the release of both our bodies
As the sweat trickles down
Wrapped is silkness of the sheets
The cloud of our lovemaking hangs in the air
As well as the sheets
As well as each other
As our love grows with each passing day
What I want to do now
Is just to be with you

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  • ChaingangAngel
    October 29, 2008
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    WOW

    This really grabbed my attention and my hornyness this was very good and well done


  • Longfella
    June 6, 2008
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    wow i really love this you are great


  • extasy
    June 6, 2008
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    this is really, really professional. I like the way you write a lot.




    blessings,
    extasy


  • paullallady silver member
    February 4, 2008

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    This is a very descriptive writing, of
    both physical and emotions. It is
    sensual and erotic and a real pleasure
    to read. good job on this one.

  • PerVirtuous
    February 4, 2008
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    Very powerful and hot!

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