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Paradise

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Along heaven's path in dreams I wander
as rainbow's hue reflects my peace
in waterfalls my heart flows true
within God's hand my spirit soars.

Time stands still in view of wonder
as dappled sun caresses my soul
the future hums in tunes of freedom
where in eternity I hope to be.

All attuned in springlike step
I float across harmony's mountains
in feathered stroke viewing epiphany
as Elysium's arms in trust's embrace.

The arch is there in passage true
my time will come in peaceful crossing
while zephyr's of this scene are whispered
live well in faith and sincerity.






Author notes

Picture credit: Jim Warren ....Thank you ShelleyA

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  • Skyie
    April 14, 2008
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    beautful, loved it : )


  • jasminerose
    February 6, 2008

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    So much beauty and inspiration in every line so wonderfully penned!!
    Loved the vivid imagery and hope of faith and devotion that just pours to the soul!! Beautifully written!!!
    Thank you for entering my contest and for sharing this lovely entry with us all!!
    Jasminerose


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    February 4, 2008

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    wow gran this is such a beautiful write and your words bringthe picture to life i loved this well done and best of luck


  • YoursTrulyJulie gold member
    February 4, 2008

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    Wow ! !

    Awesome take on the pic Well done. You have used such wonderful imagery in this write and I wish you well in this contest


  • penman gold member
    February 4, 2008
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    Excellent

    Wonderful creation for the picture. Best of luck in the contest.

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