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Windows of a soul

When I look into your eyes,
I'm searching for anything,
For anything that reasures me
That you are still human.
But when I'm caught in your
Amber gaze,
The only thing I see is myself
Staring back at me.

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  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    March 17, 2008

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    This was a good poem it sounds like one of my fav linkin park songs cant think of the name right now but anyway thanks for reading one of mypoems that means a lot sorry it took so long to get back to you been really bussy SH


  • Rashae
    March 7, 2008
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    Deep words, sad, but a good write!


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    March 4, 2008

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    "reasures" should be "reassures"....

    I like the piece....and feel more can be added to it...very abstract...