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Field of Flowers

The pain is not so bad now
So fear not for me
The road I travel now
Will take me where I want to be

I will wait for you there
In that field where I sleep
A place where theres no fear to bear
A place where I don't have to weep

So understand, my love
Thats where I'll wait for you
This place that's filled with doves
And flowers that do bloom

I will wait for in the valley
A place of instant joy
So meet me there my true love
And there our souls will join

And there will be again
To lay among the flowers bed
We'll sing about times of free and light
Then you will know we're free of plight

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 8, 2008

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    And there will be again
    To lay among the flowers bed
    We'll sing about times of free and light
    Then you will know we're free of plight


    Ah..this is indeed a voice of your deep of the heart..wonderful piece indeed ...and thanks for your entry....


  • penman gold member
    February 4, 2008
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    Wonderful

    This was very touching and full of great images. Many blessings in the contest.