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Seas of Love

We drift on salt water seas
Entombed in love as we float free
Set off on this journey together
Now we'll be together forever

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  • Owl33
    March 29, 2008

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    A very peaceful and pleasant thought. To be in love with someone so much that you can imagine having only them forever in your life. A never ending journey with the one you love would be great! I watch the ocean to escape day to day life sometimes and to have the one you love there to would be ideal. Very nice!


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    February 12, 2008

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    G'Day Lost-Rose-Petal

    This reads so bittersweet. I love the emotions tired in with the imagery ... wonderfully expressed

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    ~Manda