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Zero O'Clock

...and I stare in your eyes for the first and last
(time)

gazelockedlivesmergedmindsmeldedsoulsfused

our hearts skewered together by
two arrows toward twelve
the sun pouts in darkness
held eternally at bay

dancing to the earliest latest music
that never goes out of style
without
regret (for no past pursues)
nor fear )for no future lurks(
and only NOW exists

Forever is a point
where both ends of infinity meet
Bulls-eye!

loopingswirlingcluthchinglaughing
thirsty gravity, intoxicated
from drinking us in,
loses its hold
and we spin away

and I stare in your eyes for the first and last
(time)...

 


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  • xBluexEyedxGirlx
    February 5
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    I really like this. I love the unique styles you uses. Just in general I love it! Excellent job!

  • Lavender mist
    February 4

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    What a beautifully clever poem this is! I really enjoyed reading it and think you set it up in such a splendid way.


  • wattle silver member
    February 4

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    What a complex lady you must be. love 'the earliest latest music' for some reason. --- Thank you for offering another poem - and Thank you for the poem.