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Just like heaven

You lips are
So enticing,
And inviting...
Just like heaven...

A contest entry

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    February 4, 2008

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    xxxflipperxxx: Again i like the ending just like the song ends...not really just because the song ends that way but of the poem also.
    very very good use of words.
    thank you for entering.