Lifes so unfair,
I hate guys who think they know it all.
Lieing, Cheating, whatever I dont care.
For all I care can get oh your hangs and knees and crawl.
You cant Deny what I saw.
You cant play me for a fool.
According to the love book,
Taking advantage of a young girls heart is against the law.
I thought I loved you,
and you knew,
you turned around and became cruel.
Once youtapped that,
you got knew.
You move from girl to girl.
Forgetting about you,
I have too.
But love dont exist,
Its not real.
There would be no use to fear!!!
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Im still missing you!!!
Please tell me what you think
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TRUE LOVE IS BRING JOY N HAPPINESS N PAIN FOR SEEING OUR LOVED ONE NOT HAPPY. SO DONT WASTING YOUR TIME .,
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look your the one wasting your time on leaving me a childish comment your suppose to put positive comments not dumb cunt ones!!!
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it alright.it needs a little work.its sad, i think every female has gone through this fucked up experience.the fourth line is messed up,i think you meant to write hands not hangs and on not oh and you forgot the word you?i think its supposed to be...for all i care,you can get on your hands and knees and crawl.but mabey not.oh and from my experience all men are liars so the title is perfect.thanks for sharing,good luck finding someone who treats you how you deserve to be treated.
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I think "book of love" would have sounded better, and less awkward. You have a starting of something here. I can tell why she said that it lacked passion, but you just write different.
~ Good luck!
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It's lacking passion, though I can tell it's from a real experience. Sorry about that, that really sucks!
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lacking passion hunnie im all passion!!!
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i love it
lots of words not spelled correcet but the write is good enough to not notice
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