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natural inspiration

what is it we call this
this heart of darkness
there's nothing about it
that we can lay claim to
within ourselves or
is there

according to those rules
ones that we never see
but always conform to
without even knowing
what they are

those unnatural
constrictions
that bind us
so tightly
without
us ever
knowing
it

it,
that
which
we can
never really
hold on to
yet want to
so badly
since it's
only
natural

thats what
we want
just to
escape
from
it


......


some people
can escape these
boundaries that
they impose on us
those of us who can
should help those
of us who can't
since they
don't even
see their
bindings
we need
to show
them
all
of
it

evolve
back into
the natural
being we never
were allowed to be
so is it more of a
devolution instead
reverting to that
which we know is right,
and not what
they think is
so find out
which side
of their
societal
fence
you
are
on



free
yourself

become who
you know you
need to be

become that
person who
they never
let you be

come back
to where
you know
you will
always
belong

here
with
us



we
are
the
ones
who are
truly alive
no one else
can give you
that sense of
elation inside
(besides yourself)
you have to just
let it all come
out into the
fresh air
away from
the city
walls
the
lies
they
tell
you






so
come out
with me
please
i need
to find
an open
friend
to share
this all
with


......


are
you
the
one
for
me
?

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heart of darkness - inspiration sorta

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  • Blissfullhatred silver member
    February 4, 2008

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    Mhm am I the one for you? Interesting line. Makes the reader think about what you are telling them.I feel like you wrote this poem to me and for me. Very Good.
    <3 Rogaue aka Sarah