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novel totalitarian

what the people say shall never be changed
the government can never put away the message of the people
the people will always find freedom
security is found in the unity of the people

hello fellow citizen...
haven't you heard?
we're following them
they're leading the way

what the we shall never be changed
they can never put away our message
we will always find freedom
security is found in the unity of us

hello people of the state...
haven't you heard?
there's someone else out there
so look to us for protection
we'll help if you let us

what the we shall never be changed
you will never put away our message
we will always provide freedom
security is found under us

hello subjects of our rule...
haven't you heard?
they're growing stronger
trade in your rights for safety

all we shall never be changed
you can not put away our message
we can give you freedom
security is only found under us

hello servants...
haven't you heard?
we're your only hope
trust in us
we will save you

all we shall never be changed
you cannot put away our message
we selectively grant freedom
security is us, do as we say

remember slave,
we control you
we always have...

Author notes

1984/animal farm - slight inspiration (taken a long way off target perhaps)

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  • ThatONEweirdChick
    February 3, 2008

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    Wow yeah...
    That's all totally true in like it's own type of way. We are supposed to be able to control the government but sometimes it doesn't see so. Just like when we suspect they have secrets or withholding information we should know.. It's all crazy. Anyway, good way to show your thoughts! Great job =]