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Desert Pain

Resting upon the sway’s bet
We sit quietly for the sunrise
A hushed tone of dread is set
Blood chips and the raven cries

Our hands turn to blue stars in the night air
Vice-grip breaks the utter silence’s pain
The skeletons of trees in Death’s loving care
Forget the taste of the ice-caked rain

The sign of orange touches the cloudy sky
Caressing the scars in a tender insult
Desert sand kicked by a wind always fly
Straight through out hearts, a shredded result

Sunrise arrives, we held in the air
The wind warming skin
Colorful poison, reason to never care
Wandering souls of us, forever haunting within


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  • ellierulz
    February 24, 2008
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    Wow girly!
    You've kept at it- and you're incredible!