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Trouble with trouble





                          the days pass ceaselessly
                          in french and spanglish
                                  c'est la vie

                          english is troublesome
                          but the trouble
                          with trouble
                          is that
                          when you don't have it
                                  seguro lo das

                          and i'm not having any
                          these days
                          writing songs
                          or listing pages
                          of encryptions
                          to my heart

                          i'm not struggling
                          to straggle
                          along behind
                          the stage coach
                          driverless
                          as my mind

                          the ease of peace
                          skittles inconsistently
                          off ripples in a puddle
                          disturbed by prayers

                          heaven bound
                          e-mails
                          almost guaranteed
                          to be mistranslated
                          and get stuck in poems
                          about puddles in trouble

                          trouble with trouble
                                is
                          there's never enough






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  • myrataal gold member
    February 4, 2008

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    Ah!

    You did not lose your touch, and I am sure in many tongues you are as swift as a tongueless narrator paged on skies and in streams!

    Such good wordplay here; ever the juggler of giggling jiggles. Please tell me I did not write a wrong, Chris!

    I see you have buried yourself in books now? Please let me know how you are.

    Blessed Be.

    Myra


  • InRegardsToMyself
    February 3, 2008

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    hells yeah!!!
    great job i love every single min of it.
    My fav lines were
    "i'm not struggling
    to straggle
    along behind
    the stage coach
    driverless
    as my mind"
    great damn job wit dat....