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We always judge those

We always judge those.
We do-not understand.

We always hurt those.
We should not judge.

 

Yet the ones we judge and,

The ones we hurt are often,

The same.

A contest entry

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  • ecrivain01
    May 27, 2008
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    I like this ...

    much better, but I'd say "often the same", not "always the same".

    Anyway, this is much better, it just isn't punctuated. That's the most important of all the rules for the contest. Punctuate the poems.


  • thepoeticone
    March 24, 2008

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    very short simple, but at the same time complex to the point where it made you think, and it made you rethink your habits, to the meanings of the poem, i loved it