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Masterblaster in mind

Masterblaster's  perfect rhyme and form
Shows that's she's a poet rich and warm
With talent to write-up a major storm
But she has never written in this way

In sunny Italy is where she writes
With pen and paper sitting at the sites
Where ancient Romans whiled away their nights
Writing verse with stylus on soft clay

Myself I have to write in London town
And all that I can see is grey and brown
No wonder that I sometimes wear a frown
But I am sitting happily okay

Masterblaster gave a chance to play
Writing triplet sonnets here today

Author notes

I never know what to write when the choice is free. I hope this makes you smile.

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A contest entry

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  • Tirrell
    September 17

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    A tender sonnet and I'm sure Di loved it, for it's rich in imagery and warmth and made with love. A beautiful voice inside the words. I shall rad more later, marked you as a fav. --Robert


  • masterblaster gold member
    February 20
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    Hi, lol, very amusing, all the best in the contest,Di
  • ecrivain01 silver member
    February 6
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    Cute ...

    and I'm sure she is duly impressed.


  • PerVirtuous gold member
    February 3
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    What PP said... most appropriate initials, don't you think?


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 3

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    Wonderfully penned, being a tribute, i shall not go off in rhyme but express the beauty in your words to lighten the mood of any one who needs a little smile.
    Your awesome.

    Passions


    • cricketjeff gold member
      February 4
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      This started out as a reply to your comment, but I like it so I'm going to post it as a poem too!
      Thank-you


      Its much more fun when you have things to say
      About a friend you speak to ev'ry day
      But just with words I always like to play
      And so I wrote a po-em for MB

      The MB that I penned about in rhyme
      May not in fact exist in re-al time
      But I hope that she won't think it crime
      That I invented her in rhyme for me

      Ev'ryone I know that writes on here
      Tends to fill my heart with special cheer
      I've only been around a half a year
      So little time to know the friends I see

      But maybe you all fear that I shall be
      Around for what may seem eternity
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