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DR...Blowing Smoke

Missing image

When the smoke clears in front of me

then I can plainly see

The true picture of our friendship

and what you mean to me

 

My feelings are trying to decide

if the attraction is love or lust

I really would like for you to be

a friend whom I can trust

 

Some of the remarks you make

I don't understand at all

My legs seem to weaken from hurt

I fear that I might fall

 

The tackful way you express yourself

it could easily be a joke

I wish that you could feel some empathy

and stop just blowing smoke

 

 

 

 

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  • katiekills4
    February 4, 2008
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    This is a great poem. Very nicely written


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    February 4, 2008
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    you have some relationship examination to do , this is so to the point. good luck great xx


  • arafura gold member
    February 4, 2008

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    "I wish that you cold feel some empathy
    and stop just blowing smoke..."

    I like this very much! Good luck in the contest!