Staring upon a world
void of any sound
I see a beauty that's unimaginable
it's really quite profound
I see the light, it's dancing
driven by a silent song
Leaving footprints on the water
but it's not alone for long
Soon the wind beings to howl
And picks up all the leaves
A chorus starts to erupt
antagonized by the breeze
The clouds roll in soon after
And elicits a booming bass
As the light flies up to the heavens
in a stunning show of grace
Finally the rain,
Begins to show it's face
And I begin to realize
I'm enraptured by this place
A contest entry
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433 points, ended February 4, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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Wonderful
This is absolutly wonderful! It is so nice to stumble upon young poets that are not lost in the common angsts of their youth but seem to have found the great well of empathy from which they can write today; even as they sip tomorrows... This really is well done, Neko rei.
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Thank you so much for that! I was ecstatic to be writing something happy and I'm so glad you found it refreshing!
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superb
I'm glad you found your muse again, it feels great to read your art again! And it's just like wine, got even better over time! Btw.. the name of the cartoon it reminded me off came to me last night: fantasia
Great write
*big kiss*
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oooooooo...sweet!! i luv the description and...EVERYTHING!!!
KUDOS!! thanx for entering
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