Make me want my body want to surrender to you and scream, as your hands and tongue make me cream.
Make me want beg for more, as your thrusts glisten the sheets in gore.
Honey you got me going crazy as you keep at it like the energizer bunny as you keep going, and going, and going.
Baby boy make me cry out in pleasure as you bury deep into my treasure.
Make me call out your name in need, as you drop down to your knees and make me flow milk and honey into your warm cove.
Make me want to give it up to you all night long, not stopping until the break of dawn.
Make me tremble beneath you as you stare hungrily at me, making me have have an even greater need for you.
Make me raise my body high off of your love, as I fly into a world of ecstasy like a dove.
Make me quiver in bliss as your sweet lips kiss every inch making me shiver.
Make me cry out in pleasure, as you put you mouth to good measure.
Suck me dry at such great haste, leaving nothing left to taste of my delicious honeyed paste.
Make me feel like another woman as I wake up in your arms to see your smiling face, putting me in a state of grace.
Make me be the one your going to love forever more, under the moonlight and far offshore.
Make me be your only lover in life, until my dying days as your wife.
Author notes
Option #1
sexy enough
A contest entry
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Comments
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I love the title, make me. Plays on my fiestier side. My guy knows he can never make me but sometimes I think he wishes. Thanks for entering and good luck to you.
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Thank you for entering Cindy's and my first contest held together. It has been amazingly entertaining reading the entries. Everyone went to so much trouble which is truly appreciated by both of us. Good Luck in the judging and thank you again for such a great entry. Margaret
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This was...delicious? haha i dont really know what to call it. It was really good for a guy..but im not a man. haha :] ill grade anyway. you had great imagery and your personality showed through this piece.
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wow such deliciousness and a wedding invitation all in one... sounds like a winner...lol i wish you all the best in the contest
cheers
jen
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Very erotic indeed *hot*
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Hot! Hot! Hot!
I'm beginning to feel a little warm under the collar. Miss my sweet baby. Bye!
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Thank you for your totally pointless and indeed irrelevant entry to my contest. It is lovely to be reassured that people just don't bother to read before shoving a load of garbage into a contest. Never mind, I enjoyed dozing off after two lines or so. Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.
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omg this is almost disgusting
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Well well well....this made me wanna say to my man Make Me......lol
I enjoyed the reapet Make me it added more of a sexual level to it, for me lol
I can assume your option/choice was the word Honey, but becuase it's not in your author notes I am honestly not sure, so could you please pop into your authors the option, word/s etc etc
Thank you
Good luck
Cindy
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Acsending to grace
I loved it -
A very beauitful poem. Erotica always seems to be the best way to say "I love you" to someone don't you think? Nonetheless, wonderful job... keep it up!
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