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020308 - pre-birthday-blues

Tears and blood are never shallow
(I don't know how to swim.)

and these waves are getting higher, full of smoke and full of fire, extinguishing the fires that have ever lit the sky.

[but life is elementary,
you must face the storm outside] and

smoke is likely to cause shadow
(My sight was always grim.)

The dark is ever-during, ever steadily obscuring, and solidity of any sort is something I would grasp.

[but life is periodic,
night can not forever last] and

time is just a measure
that eternity outweighs.
My hour has stretched long now,
my line has been prolonged
do you sense that I am gone now?

-le fin

ps. [life is a conquerable thing.]

Author notes

Yes, tomorrow is my birthday! Yes, I'm not in the best of moods! Yes, this is slightly emo! And yes, no matter what, you have to be nice because, again, tomorrow's my birthday!

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  • Topnotchsy
    August 14

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    I like this piece a lot. It's very thought provoking. I know your birthday has since passed (looking at the date) but I hope it was enjoyable.