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The days pass
as if there is no time
the years fly by
where am i?
The day you left
everything stopped
I'm so confused
where do i start?
I cant find the beginning
im spinning in the end
i never made it to the middle
cause i remeber
...you left

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Written November 18th, 2003

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  • PlutoNVenus
    November 18, 2003
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    awwwww thats so sad. i hope you find your way im still looking for mine as well. this was written well.

    PlutoNVenus