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A Bad Dope Death Deal ( Spoken Word) of Me Live Video

A Bad Dope Death Deal

By: Mrs. Lady Enthralling

 

 

 

You cant slave my mentality

For deep sweat’s at bally’s

Home chick death valley

Is pushing the sells of

You cant tell

Because if you cant spell a unsolved mystery

You will

Stop the dope deals

Of I am killing

The homeless

So I can set up shop

To blind you with ignorance

While

My knowledge of words

Blow your high

And un do your

Dumb sentence

City streets

I rise

One day in sanity I blew my

Head off like

How high

Can I get from

Life experiences

With clouded lungs

Of a bad dope death deal.

C

A

N

 

Y

O

U

 

 Feel it?

 

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  • dannyjay
    April 11

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    this was a good write, but it would sound better if you read it slower and with more feeling. i enjoy ur writes-keep it up girl!


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling gold member
      April 11
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      slow uhm no thank u read it the way the owner of the work which is me wanted to read it but thank you hon

  • The Dork Knight
    February 18

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    i dig it ;)

    i liked it. lil tip for any future videos, try to contain or do something about the background noice. i wouldn't have been able to understand you without it written on the page. luv ya.


  • Swtpoetryman
    February 5

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    A POWERFUL PEACE AND PRESENTATION, INDEED!

    A powerful and thought provoking piece - to say the least - on the page - and even more so spoken by the artist who gave birth to it - who looks lovely in these videos. thanks for turning me on to it!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    February 5

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    Stunning work here. I love the whole feel of this. It is powerful in the extreme. Wonderful talented writer you are Julia.

    Much love to you
    Wayne Leon
    x


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling gold member
      February 5
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      love you wayne
      i love your work as well
      you are the best dark writer ever stephen king
      has hell on his hands
  • KadafiethaInfamous
    February 5

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    You Are Phenomenal

    You have taken allpoetry to another level and I can reallyappreciate it. I like the live videos that you are doing. I think that is the next step for all us poets and you have shown us the way. I really admire your talent and I can't imagine what Allpoetry would be like without you. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Keep looking sexy and I'll keep dreaming.


  • kennethlaney
    February 4
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    Very Nice

    I'll seen you a message!


  • Lick On Her1275
    February 4

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    sassy
    this was great
    i like your whole definition
    and you have a loovely voice and beauty full
    had to spell it out


  • Mykeee
    February 3

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    I like this. U didn't push the video with enough emotion. The theme and words were very good. Would love to see U do this on stage.


  • moluv10
    February 3

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    ok, now I really Feel It! You delivered that wonderfully. I actually like spoken word and this is what it is and you is what it is! keep up the great work.

  • moluv10
    February 3
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    I can feel it! Can't wait to see the finished version.
    you can really put it down sista!

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