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A Bad Dope Death Deal ( Spoken Word) of Me Live Video

A Bad Dope Death Deal

By: Mrs. Lady Enthralling

 

 

 

You cant slave my mentality

For deep sweat’s at bally’s

Home chick death valley

Is pushing the sells of

You cant tell

Because if you cant spell a unsolved mystery

You will

Stop the dope deals

Of I am killing

The homeless

So I can set up shop

To blind you with ignorance

While

My knowledge of words

Blow your high

And un do your

Dumb sentence

City streets

I rise

One day in sanity I blew my

Head off like

How high

Can I get from

Life experiences

With clouded lungs

Of a bad dope death deal.

C

A

N

 

Y

O

U

 

 Feel it?

 

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  • EbonyQueen48
    June 16

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    I can feel it and I do spoken word too and you are great!! I like your style and you have videos to capture your audience hearts & mind, I like your style, keep on writing and just being you!! Totally REAL!!!!


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 19, 2008

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    Wow,

    This blew my mind, as it comes strong, and I can feel ya, ya feel me? Thanks for sharing you, I enjoy spoken word, but I don't have the tools to get on up and do what you do, maybe for christmas, lol. What you wrote here flow wonderfully! And you always bring it with spoken word!


    Much love, Timothy aka poeticweaver~


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      December 29, 2008
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      what! mushy your already writing spoken word and don't even know it your fabulous honey please


  • dannyjay
    April 11, 2008

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    this was a good write, but it would sound better if you read it slower and with more feeling. i enjoy ur writes-keep it up girl!


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      April 11, 2008
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      slow uhm no thank u read it the way the owner of the work which is me wanted to read it but thank you hon


  • honorable mention
    February 18, 2008

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    i dig it ;)

    i liked it. lil tip for any future videos, try to contain or do something about the background noice. i wouldn't have been able to understand you without it written on the page. luv ya.


  • Swtpoetryman
    February 5, 2008

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    A POWERFUL PEACE AND PRESENTATION, INDEED!

    A powerful and thought provoking piece - to say the least - on the page - and even more so spoken by the artist who gave birth to it - who looks lovely in these videos. thanks for turning me on to it!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    February 5, 2008

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    Stunning work here. I love the whole feel of this. It is powerful in the extreme. Wonderful talented writer you are Julia.

    Much love to you
    Wayne Leon
    x

    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      February 5, 2008
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      love you wayne
      i love your work as well
      you are the best dark writer ever stephen king
      has hell on his hands

  • New-n-Improved
    February 5, 2008

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    You Are Phenomenal

    You have taken allpoetry to another level and I can reallyappreciate it. I like the live videos that you are doing. I think that is the next step for all us poets and you have shown us the way. I really admire your talent and I can't imagine what Allpoetry would be like without you. Keep writing and I'll keep reading. Keep looking sexy and I'll keep dreaming.


  • kennethlaney
    February 4, 2008
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    Very Nice

    I'll seen you a message!


  • Lick On Her1275
    February 4, 2008

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    sassy
    this was great
    i like your whole definition
    and you have a loovely voice and beauty full
    had to spell it out


  • Mykeee
    February 3, 2008

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    I like this. U didn't push the video with enough emotion. The theme and words were very good. Would love to see U do this on stage.


    • Mrs LadyEnthralling
      February 3, 2008
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      woo nice pic dad and of course it was quick ok
      a teaser what i call it any way thank you


  • moluv10
    February 3, 2008

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    ok, now I really Feel It! You delivered that wonderfully. I actually like spoken word and this is what it is and you is what it is! keep up the great work.


  • moluv10
    February 3, 2008
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    I can feel it! Can't wait to see the finished version.
    you can really put it down sista!

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