yellow fever
in his Valentine card
a warm request
Author notes
To the acacia tree friend
In a list
A contest entry
- Secret Valentine by Mari Goes.
800 points, ended February 15, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I think that is illegal in most countries to spread infectious diseases...I have orange fever. I think if people knew how much you liked haiku they'd appreciate one written by you to them more...or maybe not, people are pretty shallow. I appreciate the one you wrote for me...ones I mean, thanks!
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Excellent! Hmm, I really like how this can be read different ways implying very different sentiments. Good luck in the contest!
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My, my, my, very touching. I feel warm all over. Thank you.
(and one more with a long stem )
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If he never stops by to read it can you re-dedicate it to me? I'm very needy these days.
I think that is illegal...passing contagious diseases through the mail...no wonder he's warm...it's the fever...
I want another haiku, not like you have a lot of words to write...I'll even help...
the greatest human being
who has graced this earth--
my name goes on the next line...go write.
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i get this one... got the "aha" moment, warm indeed; so very nicely done with humor and big smiles...PK
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