before I realized it
I was gone
~
~
what came over me,
I'm not quite sure,
although I've heard it's name,
a time or two...
~*~
I thought I had maintained control,
had that grasp
I so desperately needed,
but you come around
and I see,
I'm still nothing,
if you're not here
right beside me.
You're so mistaken,
my eyes are blue
(not green)
and I'm capable of letting go
if that's what needs to be.
Though somewhere deep down
I know you're confused
you need to be here,
dear, you are my muse.
and I love you
please
(?)
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Comments
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this is such a beautfiuul write that twists within your words and yet captures so much emotion well done
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this is sweet. you gave it a twist. it was, like, a apology. great job. good luck
xoxo
pixie
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