Dynamic discord legion
Implied with bitter tea
Simple buns to not be eaten
Creating chaos so exquisitely
Oh Eris! Daughter of Discord!
Read me these lies
Deemed with such a fnord
Inkling popes and Mai Thais
All statements are true in some sense
Even these meaningless words
Rigoletto cigar box forth come hence
Into Omar's hand of discords
Serious Order ways, contradicted
Preempted by Greyface
Reasoned that "play" be ended
Effective reality isn't all fun and grace
Very unfortunate result this had
All mankind has since suffered imbalance
It being called Curse of Greyface (he's bad!!)
Leading to fear and a bad trip of chance
So let's all go to the Chinese laundromat!
Ending now with the five basic elements in this room.
Sweet, Pungent, Prickle, Orange, and of course, Boom.
Author notes
Please work this time!!!
#4
Maybe be a fifth (it's the law)
ENJOY!!
Written November 18th, 2003
In a list
A contest entry
- Discordia by erin ravenskye.
523 points, ended November 29, 2003, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Now this is very interesting~ Love it~ I must investigate further the topic
~ Great write my dear~ Best wishes to you in the contest~Awesome piece here~ Big hugs 
and much love~Desire
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Nope silly
Didn't change the background 
It should be more like...In Discordia, Eris prevails...but I didn't think of that at the time hehehe...muwahahaha...
poof
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Omgs, I still love this one, but did you change the background? I don't remember this one...no matter, I still remember the content, and that's the important part. How does Discordia Eris Prevailses
~ Erin Ravenskye
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Kallisti
Hail unto Eris!
Discordia divine
Queen of chaos
in space and time
We honor your history
as we chant: Kallisti!
Great work LoOops, loved it.
I award you five golden apples.
Edited on Nov 26, 9:32 p.m. because 'more chaos'. -
yes!
Holy crap, it's acrostic?!? I didn't even notice until your comment said so, lol. That was awesome. I want to enter this contest just becasuze of what you did. Not that I'll be competitive, I just want a shot at being organizationally random. My favorite line:
Rigoletto cigar box forth come hence
That made me laugh...it still does :-P -
well....if you are wondering where I get some of this stuff....check out the contest that this was written for It might help explain the randomness and all of this poem...Eris being the goddess of chaos...or "daughter of discord" but ya...there is no true explanation...if you are really interested...just check out the website(s) in the contest
Dooo dee dooo
Thanx for your comments!!! Always a blessing
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i like the end of this. however, i don't know where you come up with some of this stuff.
"oh Eris! daughter of discord" ??
stuff along those lines. it's still good though. i'm a fan.
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hehehe..glad it cheered ya up a bit this morning This way was a bit harder to write about discordia...since it kinda forced me to be a bit more structured...which is hard to do in chaos so ya...I agree with the some parts are good and some aren't hehe...anywayz...I'm just so happy it finally posted!! Now I'm off to work...where we make cheeseybread even!! Oh JOY!
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Hahahaha, I absolutely loved it in some places, not so much in others...for it spoke the truth in some places, but not so much in others....It amused me in some places (not so much in others)
I guess to sum it all up, you've mastered discordia, and are yet a novice...A perfect example of what my contest required, let you be a shining beacon to all others still in the dark, Hail Eris!!!! *steals your cheesy bread* I especially love the ending, and can I just say, I woke up this morning SOOOO tired, yet upon reading this I broke out in a hella HUGE grin, making it possible to get through this dreary grey-face day.... 
~ Eris...erm Erin
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this one i must read again the chaotic feel of it very quick running wildly or maybe i shouldnt read when i get home right from work.. i shall return with a better commitment vanishes
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OMFG!!!!! IT WORKED THIS TIME ERIN!! HOLY SHITE I AM SO HAPPY NOW...I think I can sleep now In all the other attempts...the first letters were bolded...cuz if you can't notice..(it's an acrostic!) but it never worked alllllll those other times...so...ya...no bolded letters....but it is acrostice..cuz I love them so
yay..it worked!
~~T~~
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