Couldn't you have taken all the memories?
Couldn't you have left behind my heart?
Couldn't you have vanished into nothing?
Maybe then I wouldn't be falling apart...
Couldn't you have never spoken to me again?
Couldn't you have washed away with the rain?
Couldn't you have turned your back forever?
Maybe then I wouldn't be in so much pain...
Couldn't you have never tried to call me?
Couldn't you have never left me like this?
Couldn't you have faded away gracefully?
Maybe then I could make believe you don't exist...
Author notes
option #6
A contest entry
- Stephenie Meyer's Based Series Round 2 by LoneFairrie.
525 points, ended February 18, 2008, 8 entries
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Comments
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i like your poem it sounds the way im feeling right now
why cant forgeting someone you love or love its self for that matter be easier
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This is beautiful work I love New Moon and you did a brilliant take oin the prompt, I would love it if you would check out my work
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Awe, you almost made me cry too!!! I can imagine Bella thinking this! This was very well done!!! Great poem!
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