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shaking

this caffeine gets to me
far too easily
i'm shaking again
from the much loved
coffee dreams


and your heart
appeared
in my froth

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  • acoustical
    February 3, 2008

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    this is really good but you might wanna change the colors cuz i had to highlight it to see it?

    ...foam=tea leaves