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Leaving Hurts...

Edward:
I know you don't understand,
I know you never will,
Just know its for the best,
And I will love you still.

I have to leave you,
Its for the best you see,
I don't want you to be hurt,
Especially by me.

I won't tell you where I'm going,
Or my real reason for doing this to you,
I just have to tell I don't love you,
And I'll hope you think its true.

I know it will hurt you,
You won't know I'll die with out you,
I know you'll cry,
You won't know that I will too.

Bella:
I walk around like a zombie,
Wanting to hate you but...,
A part of me died when you left,
I need to do something, but what?

I don't know what day it is,
And I don't really care,
Your probably doing fine with out me,
But I'm in pain, it's not fair.

I put myself in danger,
To imagine you telling me to quit,
I knew that I never deserved you,
I knew that we would never fit.

I still didn't want it to end,
To stubborn to see it was wrong,
It really didn't help,
When you wrote me that sweet song.

How could you think I could forget you,
Like you didn't exist at all,
How do you expect me to go on,
When you're not there to catch me when I fall.

Both:
You will never know how much I hurt,
Or how much I wish the pain would go away,
I don't care if I die,
I just wish, with you, I could have stayed.

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  • Simply Simple
    February 11, 2008

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    Awwww! Gosh this made me cry. no joke. It's sooooooo sad!!!!!!!!! I hate how he left her. But I loved the end. Hehe. Great write. It really captured the emotional strain of them both. It would be really great as a song!


  • LoneFairrie
    February 3, 2008

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    Awe. You seriously almost made me cry. I could imagine this. In a movie they'd be in two different places and it would be on song form. Very well done!!!


    • Zane Rose
      February 3, 2008
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      lol. thanks for the comment. I actually thought about that after i finished it and read through it. ^^.
      thanks agian.
      ~VT~


  • RunningFromReality
    February 3, 2008

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    awe it almost make me cry!!! thank goodness i'm hungry and i want my ravioli in the microwave or i wouldve started crying!!!