if i had two hearts,
i wouldn't be in this pain,
to love two men with,
instead with of one,
a hearts that tearing,
would that be a wonderful thing,
for how can i love one,
if my heart belongs to the other,
love bears two vines,
the first of happiness,
the world warm and fuzzy,
the other vine,
of pain and sorrow,
a dark,cold,loomy place,
if i had two hearts,
instead of one,
it might be for the better,
but probably the worst!!!
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Comments
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This is a good one here! I never thought about having two hearts. That would probably help but if we had two heart then we would most likely love four men LOL! Good job and thank you for your entry and good luck
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This I can deffinatley understand, I thouroughly enjoyed it. Thank you for your entery, you are very talented, good luck.
Stormy
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yeah..I had a similar problem...which is written in the text..My addvice to you is just tell him how you're feeling and that you may just need a few days by yourself...and then see where it goes from there!
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if we had two hearts, then perhaps it wouldn't be wrong......but then, where would that lead everyone in life because one heart would tell them to stay while the other tells them to walk away......while with just one heart, we can love and hate just the same but instead we would be broken in half by one heart instead of two.......but sometimes it would be better but to have two hearts, would mean to have two bodies and two minds of the one. it would in turn, be a hard life still. this is a good piece and truly questions the fact that if we had two hearts, would it defiantly be better or worse. great piece and good luck.
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