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Reverie

Emerging from mists
of deep reverie
reflections ripple
through thoughts
that time cannot measure.

Spirit saturates all
soaking, seeping
running in rivulets
down pathways to pool
in Nature's perfection.



Author notes

10 line sunday quickie: "To see a world in a grain of sand, And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
An eternity in an hour."
~William Blake

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  • poet2angels gold member
    February 3, 2008

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    sigh~
    I am so fond of alliteration when done so softly as this....and the imagery is beautiful...
    I really love this piece

    Lynda


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 3, 2008

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    What a lovely thought for
    this prompt! Great imagery
    throughout it and good luck
    to you in the contest!




    Jeremy0826